English is not read vertically. Orienting the text that way makes this essentially unreadable. I understand that you are trying to cover up the original Japanese text, but this is not an acceptable solution.

Base +9, damyan +10, narach +11, lapan +10, undersizeskate +8, oniaxinii +16, Mugen no Saga +5, Fgfg3852 +12, destructorspace +29, AlekSlayer -10, kingstalker +1, Maximum_Joe +35, Kayzor -9, and 2 more...

It's unreadable. Just make the font smaller and put it in the normal way.

Base +4, narach +11, jolls6577 +12, oniaxinii +16, Fgfg3852 +12, AlekSlayer -10, zanepepper -7, kingstalker +1

ok, Done c:

Base +7, Fgfg3852 +12, destructorspace +29, SCSS +10, damyan +10, aestrea +12, oniaxinii +16, SakakiFan01 +10, Durlag +10, kingstalker +1

oo appreciate this very much. all of sumomo dou's works should be translated.

Base +8, destructorspace +29, Zero Angel +38, AlekSlayer +10, hesho +15, kingstalker +1, adfgrtgsdfgsfd +4, slimedog +8, conundrum +7

Shemale =/= futa, just saying...

I'm happy with the translation regardless of font, so long as it's nice and clear.

Base +6, destructorspace +29, SCSS +10, AlekSlayer +10, kingstalker +1, Maximum_Joe +35, J99814 +12, anonywhat -3, conundrum +7, gladiatorua +6

On page 5 運動させなくてはいけない, she's actually forced to exercise through orgasms using that bondage suit and her vibes, presumably because she can't really do it any other way, so it's not a sleeping harness.
Sorry about being picky, but I'm a translator reading raws to see what I wanted to work on, and read this one in Japanese before I saw the English version.
Also, each time someone else speaks, it's better to start a new line to avoid confusing the reader, and to tell the reader who said what once in a while, since the dialogue on pg 13 wasn't that clear.

Base +4, slimedog +10